This collection is larger than it first appears: about three hundred tanka printed up to five to a page. It is, nevertheless, very readable, a very good choice of font making a real difference. The book is quite attractive, with a lovely work of original art, Spring, by Deborah Faeryglenn for the front cover. The collection is organized in journal format, with months as chapters, beginning with June 2005 and ending with June 2006. Dates, in a script font, and occasional head notes precede each tanka. The book is dedicated to the memory of Kituai's friend Rose-Mary Slade Swan, the last year of whose life coincides with the period of the collection and figures prominently in the poems.
The collection opens on June 7, 2005 with:
news that the cancer
growing in your uterus
must be pruned—
I write a requiem
for cut flowers
settling in the ward
she takes her medication—
Rose is facing surgery
I am safely in bed,
facing a blank wall
in your own dim night
you have brought me a gift
of darkness
I had no other way
of knowing how to unwrap
still holding leaves
oaks straggle into winter
reluctantly
too soon at the end
of this tanka journey
One might expect, at this point, that this collection would have an overall elegiac tone. It
does not. The poems certainly do treat matters of great gravity and the collection as a
whole may reasonably to be taken as an elegy in homage to a dear friend's life.
Nevertheless, tllere is far too much awareness of the intensity and beauty of life for this to
be mere elegy. Rather, it is a celebration of life, both its daily wonders and its sobering
losses. Specifically, these poems celebrate life in A.ustralia—the locale is a virtual character
in tllese verses, so distinctive and engaging is it. With its cumulative richness of detail, this
collection is almost novelistic. One feels that as one reads it—lives unfolding in their myriad aspects and interrelationships in a fully realized environment. Of course, the chronological ordering of the collection adds to that impression, being a virtual narrative of that year's passage.
Those who follow tanka, whether online, in periodicals or books, will be familiar with Kathy Kituai. Her fine tanka grace many venues. What is to be found in this book that is of special interest is her talent in handling long-form journaling in tanka. The risk of such projects, of course, is a deadening sameness. In the bands of an expert, that need not occur. Kituai brings fresh insights, imagery, and interest to each tanka while maintaining the thread of the days, weeks, and months connecting them. What rewards wait in these pages for the careful reader ... like this one:
no violin string
or concertos requi.redjust
yellowing leaves
and that chorus of poplars
against the greyest of skies
(March 11, 2006)
This collection was edited by the poet and translator, Amelia Fielden, who also wrote the
fine afterword for the book. I heartily recommend Kathy Kituai's Straggling into Winter to
anyone who loves tanka. For those with an interest in tanka as journal, it is a must-have.
– the Editor, Modern English Tanka |